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Voice of the Devil Ch. 01

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by condoni03/02/04

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well the story was poorly developed. the characeters seemed to dwell to much. i found there to be to many fillers in the story as well. not to mention the story is incomplete.

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by Anonymous07/23/12

More Please. : )

Ch. 02???

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