You sure scared me quite a few times, first with Jane asking for the certificate, then with Zach finding out, then again with Jane and her wife asking for the seed of life and the wreck guy committing the suicide to top it off….my heart almost couldn’t keep up. The licence was a really nice touch that was simply to good to refuse, plus it gave those two ladies a reason for even more happiness. Though the exchange of the seed made me crack up with laughter more than anything else.
I see that J&J are still keeping secrets from mum (at least for a time), obviously the old habits die hard. And damn Amy sure is knowledgeable when it counts, and packing a mouth as well doing so. Still a far cry from Jessica when creaky, but she was pregnant so we let it slide.
With all that said I still find it the best that they managed to find new friends and make new bonds for the future generations. The legal wedding and the birth of the little one were just the icing on the cake. Now their happiness for a great family is truly underway!
- it's nice to see people like Jane & her wife who are prepared to spend their heavy leverage favours just to get a chance at a happy family life;
- Amy calling Jessica "her sister" while on the line with the 911 melted my heart, not because it's unusual but because she did it on instinct to people she doesn't know;
- Jane & Melissa doing it at J&J house might raise an eyebrow even from me but by now they must be quite good friends to do so;
- How come that LJ and Ella weren't at the wedding ceremony?
- skipping time frame so lightly makes this such a breeze to read, respect man!
I'm posting this here. I've been bogged down with personal life, death in the family so Ch. 11 will most likely be posted late in January or early February. I can promise the same intensity if not more in this next chapter.
I'll also be posting my other most active project around then as well.
Stay Tuned.
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Anonymous01/09/16
fantastic
This was great as it should be with siblings. Yes the trauma was there but not to much just when it needed it. Hope the rest is the same as these two deserve to be together as too many government and people shun this behaviour but why they love each other and need to live a happy life
English
More than worth the wait
You sure scared me quite a few times, first with Jane asking for the certificate, then with Zach finding out, then again with Jane and her wife asking for the seed of life and the wreck guy committing the suicide to top it off….my heart almost couldn’t keep up. The licence was a really nice touch that was simply to good to refuse, plus it gave those two ladies a reason for even more happiness. Though the exchange of the seed made me crack up with laughter more than anything else.
I see that J&J are still keeping secrets from mum (at least for a time), obviously the old habits die hard. And damn Amy sure is knowledgeable when it counts, and packing a mouth as well doing so. Still a far cry from Jessica when creaky, but she was pregnant so we let it slide.
With all that said I still find it the best that they managed to find new friends and make new bonds for the future generations. The legal wedding and the birth of the little one were just the icing on the cake. Now their happiness for a great family is truly underway!
5* don't do it justice :)
Oh, and some more observations
Sorry for missing these on the first run:
- it's nice to see people like Jane & her wife who are prepared to spend their heavy leverage favours just to get a chance at a happy family life;
- Amy calling Jessica "her sister" while on the line with the 911 melted my heart, not because it's unusual but because she did it on instinct to people she doesn't know;
- Jane & Melissa doing it at J&J house might raise an eyebrow even from me but by now they must be quite good friends to do so;
- How come that LJ and Ella weren't at the wedding ceremony?
- skipping time frame so lightly makes this such a breeze to read, respect man!
More to come.
I'm posting this here. I've been bogged down with personal life, death in the family so Ch. 11 will most likely be posted late in January or early February. I can promise the same intensity if not more in this next chapter.
I'll also be posting my other most active project around then as well.
Stay Tuned.
fantastic
This was great as it should be with siblings. Yes the trauma was there but not to much just when it needed it. Hope the rest is the same as these two deserve to be together as too many government and people shun this behaviour but why they love each other and need to live a happy life
outstanding
ticks all my boxes for a great story
thank you
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