Although the act of incest is something I could never bring myself to do, I have always been fascinated by stories of it......This one was without a doubt, one of the very best I have evr read, and I hope the author keeps up the good work..
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Anonymous01/26/04
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Enjoyed your story. Hope you are planning on more writings
by and large the best yet...your writings get better with each new story,,, the split viewpoint was very effective in telling the tale form both points of view...it showed how each knew what they were doing was wrong yet both wanted it so badly...excellent storytelling...keep up the good work
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Anonymous06/27/04
Style
very awkward style
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Anonymous01/17/05
more like a ninety
I really enjoyed it, but wanted a lot more. When you do a two sided story you don't have enough space to fully develop the story. They both felt regret, even while they were driven by animal instincts. I wanted to understand that emotion from the characters, I wanted a day after. I hope you continue the story and have them explore that part of the story. He took her virginity, did he leave her with child?
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Anonymous06/09/08
guilty pleasures
will daddy continue to play with his baby girl?
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Anonymous04/28/10
Interesting....
I don't normally read incest but I read one of your other stories and sawthis and thought,"what the hell? I'll give it a shot." Anyways, I likethe way that they were both feeling reget and that they knew it was wrong and yet try wanted the act, if not the other person. Really great job!
Very well done. I loved the way that it was laid out as this avoided a lot of talking back and forth. It wouldn't work for all stories but it did superbly for this one. A follow up story would be great. Thanks.
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Tasty Taboo....
Although the act of incest is something I could never bring myself to do, I have always been fascinated by stories of it......This one was without a doubt, one of the very best I have evr read, and I hope the author keeps up the good work..
More stories
Enjoyed your story. Hope you are planning on more writings
loved the style of it & story
by and large the best yet...your writings get better with each new story,,, the split viewpoint was very effective in telling the tale form both points of view...it showed how each knew what they were doing was wrong yet both wanted it so badly...excellent storytelling...keep up the good work
Style
very awkward style
more like a ninety
I really enjoyed it, but wanted a lot more. When you do a two sided story you don't have enough space to fully develop the story. They both felt regret, even while they were driven by animal instincts. I wanted to understand that emotion from the characters, I wanted a day after. I hope you continue the story and have them explore that part of the story. He took her virginity, did he leave her with child?
guilty pleasures
will daddy continue to play with his baby girl?
Interesting....
I don't normally read incest but I read one of your other stories and sawthis and thought,"what the hell? I'll give it a shot." Anyways, I likethe way that they were both feeling reget and that they knew it was wrong and yet try wanted the act, if not the other person. Really great job!
Peace and keep up the good work,
~A Fan
Excellent.
Very well done. I loved the way that it was laid out as this avoided a lot of talking back and forth. It wouldn't work for all stories but it did superbly for this one. A follow up story would be great. Thanks.
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