I really liked this story! It had good content and a fantastic story line. Very erotic and believable! Really hott!
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Anonymous03/14/04
WOW!
That was such a fantastic story..I loved it! It made me so wet and horny..I just had to finger myself!!
by
Anonymous08/22/04
hottttttttt
wow! that story was hotter than a 2 dollar pistol. reminds me of the time i pumped my neice.
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Anonymous10/07/04
A hot burning skin erotica. Hot very hot
I love incest of Uncle and Niece
I love erotica of Master and young maidservant
I love erotica of Teacher and young school girl.
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Anonymous10/29/04
Movie review
If only she hadn't stood up in the movie to get that membrane punctured. That was not good writing. but other than that, interesting, oh by the way. was uncle really her daddy? The story started that way. I enjoyed.
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Anonymous02/07/06
Needs work!
Maybe she needs to go further, now that her cherry is busted?
Hi, Great hot story. good writing. Don`t concern your self over the negative critics. Listen to the lady who when she read your story said she had to finger herself. (By the way fingering lady, if you look back over your comments I`d love to replace your fingers with my hard fucking prick.) And thats what this story did. Made my fucking prick hard and hot. Keep the stories cumming. John P
English
Hot!
Extremely vivid and brimming with erotic, taboo, energy.
Great Story!
I really liked this story! It had good content and a fantastic story line. Very erotic and believable! Really hott!
WOW!
That was such a fantastic story..I loved it! It made me so wet and horny..I just had to finger myself!!
hottttttttt
wow! that story was hotter than a 2 dollar pistol. reminds me of the time i pumped my neice.
A hot burning skin erotica. Hot very hot
I love incest of Uncle and Niece
I love erotica of Master and young maidservant
I love erotica of Teacher and young school girl.
e-mail : handsum_n_hot@yahoo.com
Movie review
If only she hadn't stood up in the movie to get that membrane punctured. That was not good writing. but other than that, interesting, oh by the way. was uncle really her daddy? The story started that way. I enjoyed.
Needs work!
Maybe she needs to go further, now that her cherry is busted?
Great Story
Hi, Great hot story. good writing. Don`t concern your self over the negative critics. Listen to the lady who when she read your story said she had to finger herself. (By the way fingering lady, if you look back over your comments I`d love to replace your fingers with my hard fucking prick.) And thats what this story did. Made my fucking prick hard and hot. Keep the stories cumming. John P
Excellent
I enjoyed this. Kallisti is the hot young niece we all wish we had. I'm sure there is more to tell of her story. Well written.
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