I was almost not going to finish the story because it seemed so stereotyped.
I will look for more of your stuff later
by
Anonymous01/27/04
Quality writing
Well done.
Very competent charactor development,
scene-setting, atmospherics and erotica.
by
Anonymous01/27/04
A bit more like it
I gotta agree with the first poster. I was gonna stop reading
what seemed to be the usual BS, but the held on for the twist
ending. Not really all that hot, but at least you seemed to put some
effort into it. 100% for that.
A terrific story. A little excitement from the normal daily lives, a little seduction, a getaway to a different location and you have just what is needed every once in a while to keep the marriage going strong.
We should all date our spouses/significant others on a regular basis. We wanted to be together when we were first going out. Why should that change over the years. Keep it fresh, keep it exciting, keep it loving, it can last a life time.
LiteErotica would have 2 stories in it. People would never need and the "cheating spouse" genre would be darn near dead!:-) This shows a maturity to it that is great to see!
now if i could find a husband like that, then i would actually consider getting married. i really enjoyed that one, very sexy and bad and wow. hehehe. oh by the way, is that description of her husband really u???? hmmm sounds like it could b
I like stories with a surprise ending. This one delivers. This guy is a talented writer, in my opinion. I'm glad he takes time to give us glimpses into his erotic mind.
by
Anonymous04/21/05
surprise?
I read this because I was so impressed with your story "average Wife" or "Ordinary Wife" but I almost gave up on this half way through it seemed so diametricallt opposite to your average wife story that I was getting disgusted.Thanks for restoring my faith with your surprise ending. 60 year old George
by
Anonymous04/21/05
Now I understand.
I was wondering how a woman almost 40 could get fucked so easy. Now I understand since it was her husband.
I had read your story about the average wife and liked it. I read the story about Christopher and his teacher and was glad that you had her character be single. As I said in my comments there, I am tired of all of the glorification of cheating in many of these stories. I don't mind the cheating as long as the story deals with the consequences.
Any way, like many others, as I began to read this story I began to get disappointed. I thought, oh no, here we go again. But after going a bit further, it hit me. I bet that guy is her husband. THANK YOU!
English
Nice twist!
I was almost not going to finish the story because it seemed so stereotyped.
I will look for more of your stuff later
Quality writing
Well done.
Very competent charactor development,
scene-setting, atmospherics and erotica.
A bit more like it
I gotta agree with the first poster. I was gonna stop reading
what seemed to be the usual BS, but the held on for the twist
ending. Not really all that hot, but at least you seemed to put some
effort into it. 100% for that.
What can I say?
A terrific story. A little excitement from the normal daily lives, a little seduction, a getaway to a different location and you have just what is needed every once in a while to keep the marriage going strong.
We should all date our spouses/significant others on a regular basis. We wanted to be together when we were first going out. Why should that change over the years. Keep it fresh, keep it exciting, keep it loving, it can last a life time.
George
If there were more couples like this.....
LiteErotica would have 2 stories in it. People would never need and the "cheating spouse" genre would be darn near dead!:-) This shows a maturity to it that is great to see!
sexy sexy
now if i could find a husband like that, then i would actually consider getting married. i really enjoyed that one, very sexy and bad and wow. hehehe. oh by the way, is that description of her husband really u???? hmmm sounds like it could b
Surprise, surprise!
I like stories with a surprise ending. This one delivers. This guy is a talented writer, in my opinion. I'm glad he takes time to give us glimpses into his erotic mind.
surprise?
I read this because I was so impressed with your story "average Wife" or "Ordinary Wife" but I almost gave up on this half way through it seemed so diametricallt opposite to your average wife story that I was getting disgusted.Thanks for restoring my faith with your surprise ending. 60 year old George
Now I understand.
I was wondering how a woman almost 40 could get fucked so easy. Now I understand since it was her husband.
I Saw It Coming
I had read your story about the average wife and liked it. I read the story about Christopher and his teacher and was glad that you had her character be single. As I said in my comments there, I am tired of all of the glorification of cheating in many of these stories. I don't mind the cheating as long as the story deals with the consequences.
Any way, like many others, as I began to read this story I began to get disappointed. I thought, oh no, here we go again. But after going a bit further, it hit me. I bet that guy is her husband. THANK YOU!
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1* another old hide story.
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