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A Teaser Taken

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/13/15

wonderful

Need more!

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by PrincessJezebel12/13/15

Delicious!

That was incredibly...........well, erotic! I'm usually a stickler for grammar and punctuation, but the sort of "stream of consciousness" style worked extremely well with this story. I think I need to go and find my vibrator. :)

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by christmas_ape12/16/15

sexcellent

delicious descriptions. thanks!

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by amsterdam11/03/16

Erotica at its best

Older man / younger woman really isn't my thing, neither are short stories. Therefore a true testament to your writing skills to receive 5 stars and much admiration for 'A Teaser Taken'.

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