That was incredibly...........well, erotic! I'm usually a stickler for grammar and punctuation, but the sort of "stream of consciousness" style worked extremely well with this story. I think I need to go and find my vibrator. :)
Older man / younger woman really isn't my thing, neither are short stories. Therefore a true testament to your writing skills to receive 5 stars and much admiration for 'A Teaser Taken'.
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wonderful
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Delicious!
That was incredibly...........well, erotic! I'm usually a stickler for grammar and punctuation, but the sort of "stream of consciousness" style worked extremely well with this story. I think I need to go and find my vibrator. :)
sexcellent
delicious descriptions. thanks!
Erotica at its best
Older man / younger woman really isn't my thing, neither are short stories. Therefore a true testament to your writing skills to receive 5 stars and much admiration for 'A Teaser Taken'.
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