carries its own miracles with it, and you have told this story well!
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Anonymous02/04/16
Amazing
I've only just found any of your work on this site today, starting with Cherry Pie: Born Again Virgins and it's absolutely outstanding. You have consistently excellent writing that I just couldn't help but read more. Before this and the Christmas with Daddy original I'd read your Hot Tub MILF Machine. It's all too good, really. You write incest so well, it's crazy how you've managed to capture stories on this fetish so perfectly. In CP the final literal climax with his sister was such a tease, and it was a little disappointing that you hadn't gone into detail but idk it wasn't really about that in the first place.
The build-up in these stories is phenomenal, and the way your characters interact at times hilariously and others with such deeply emotional connections, it creates these wonderful tales. I don't know if I've ever seen a character on this site as complex as the mother in this one. Consequently the others had to be as well, but maybe not quite as much as the Baby Girl who lost her Daddy to her daughter. It makes me want to see this story from her side. How could she have held on even after her perceived betrayal? I like to think that your characters from this story have made things right and won't fall apart again as they did before.
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Forgiveness
carries its own miracles with it, and you have told this story well!
Amazing
I've only just found any of your work on this site today, starting with Cherry Pie: Born Again Virgins and it's absolutely outstanding. You have consistently excellent writing that I just couldn't help but read more. Before this and the Christmas with Daddy original I'd read your Hot Tub MILF Machine. It's all too good, really. You write incest so well, it's crazy how you've managed to capture stories on this fetish so perfectly. In CP the final literal climax with his sister was such a tease, and it was a little disappointing that you hadn't gone into detail but idk it wasn't really about that in the first place.
The build-up in these stories is phenomenal, and the way your characters interact at times hilariously and others with such deeply emotional connections, it creates these wonderful tales. I don't know if I've ever seen a character on this site as complex as the mother in this one. Consequently the others had to be as well, but maybe not quite as much as the Baby Girl who lost her Daddy to her daughter. It makes me want to see this story from her side. How could she have held on even after her perceived betrayal? I like to think that your characters from this story have made things right and won't fall apart again as they did before.
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