There's no sex with her dad, in the story, and even the insipid 'Daddy' fantasy didn't really qualify as 'incest', in my opinion. By the way - was it Mr. Martin, or Mr. Scott? You seem to have switched names. Though Dad says, 'show Martin where the coats are', she looks at "Mr. Martin", and then asks Mr. Scott to follow her to the coat room. Can't say you get any points for keeping things even reasonably accurate.
This piece of tripe gets a solid "1", from this reader.
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Anonymous12/14/15
Damn
I came. It did its job
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Anonymous12/15/15
Category is incest / taboo this obviously falls under taboo not incest
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Anonymous12/15/15
Christmas Wish To Santa
Please DON'T write another story! EVER!!!
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Anonymous12/15/15
Another Xmas wish to Santa
That the asshole of Lit, dear annony back with you and make him freeze to death. This animal is a asshole and needs to be removed from Lit! Gave it a 5
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Anonymous12/16/15
Very Exciting
She deserved every single smack. Please write the next part of the story where her real Daddy punishes her -- really, really hard. Five stars.
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Anonymous12/16/15
urmhhhh
Eearly twenties girl getting serviced by older man means she knows what she wants and where to get it. Not Taboo, Not incest either. I suppose you could be heading that way.
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Anonymous12/17/15
Hot, but mislabeled.
A quick, hot read, but like others have pointed out, this isn't Incest/Taboo; xmas party is a near inconsequential detail, the party could be for any reason, and wasn't necessary.
A May-December fling with a Daddy fantasy would fall under Mature, not Incest/Taboo; nothing incentous (Daddy fantasy doesn't count unless he's her real Daddy), nor taboo goin' on here.
If you wanted to add homicide to the second chapter, I'd believe that fo' sho! Any "friend" I catch banging my daughter is a dead man.
English
Hot!
Sexy little tale! You've skirted the category requirement, though, but can be forgiven if you get to some daughter/dad sex in part two! Four stars.
That was hot!! Left my pussy aching to be touched unfortunately can't do that while at work - wow.
Sweet
It was sweet... Please continue!
Where is the incest, in this story?
There's no sex with her dad, in the story, and even the insipid 'Daddy' fantasy didn't really qualify as 'incest', in my opinion. By the way - was it Mr. Martin, or Mr. Scott? You seem to have switched names. Though Dad says, 'show Martin where the coats are', she looks at "Mr. Martin", and then asks Mr. Scott to follow her to the coat room. Can't say you get any points for keeping things even reasonably accurate.
This piece of tripe gets a solid "1", from this reader.
Damn
I came. It did its job
Category is incest / taboo this obviously falls under taboo not incest
Christmas Wish To Santa
Please DON'T write another story! EVER!!!
Another Xmas wish to Santa
That the asshole of Lit, dear annony back with you and make him freeze to death. This animal is a asshole and needs to be removed from Lit! Gave it a 5
Very Exciting
She deserved every single smack. Please write the next part of the story where her real Daddy punishes her -- really, really hard. Five stars.
urmhhhh
Eearly twenties girl getting serviced by older man means she knows what she wants and where to get it. Not Taboo, Not incest either. I suppose you could be heading that way.
Hot, but mislabeled.
A quick, hot read, but like others have pointed out, this isn't Incest/Taboo; xmas party is a near inconsequential detail, the party could be for any reason, and wasn't necessary.
A May-December fling with a Daddy fantasy would fall under Mature, not Incest/Taboo; nothing incentous (Daddy fantasy doesn't count unless he's her real Daddy), nor taboo goin' on here.
If you wanted to add homicide to the second chapter, I'd believe that fo' sho! Any "friend" I catch banging my daughter is a dead man.
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