All Comments on 'Humiliating Ordeal of the Nude Model'

this story was HOT

There should be more of this kind of story! And this one has "sequel" potential!!

Suspense, suspense and more suspense! Great!

Hot really hot Bethany Anne

Keep wrting..Put more of the aspects of total BONDAGE into you theme..Blindfolded...Gagged. But stay away from the Beatings or Spankings.

Keep writing you have great insight into the female orgasim

One of the most arousing stories I have read, my wife is gonna love it. You have a very good insight in female sexuality.

HOT HOT HOT.. i would love for them to all fuck her...maybe have her protest a little more.. but all in all a good story!

Let's take a sexy situation and make it read like a car repair manual shall we.

How is it that you can write a super hot story like this and then not post anything for almost 4 years. Give us more please.

Flushed and swollen are hot button words. This was seven years ago and you're probably a mother and respectible by now. Still, you are good. Stick with the sex part and skip the story. Maybe switch back and forth. Maybe you were in a tent with the sleeping bag slid off...time to look at his weapon, soft...but not fraigle.

Switch back and forth. Imagine what the sensatons and feelings are when a man first enters you...and then switch to the sensations of you...your legs spread, your breasts exposed.

Try writing from a non-sexual part like a tent and you're just exploring parts that women only see in the dark.

I hope you write back as it is seven years since you wrote this.

John

Your references to being swollen made such perfect sense in the context of your story

But switch, because a guy is swollen, to

John

Actually, it's your story that made this story really hot! The situation ... being treated like a sex object without adulation ... that's what made this really appealing.

I liked how helpless she became and how they treated her like an object. Her horniness proved her willingness to be treated like a whore

wanna look at this photoshoot ! does it exist ?? and did this "abused" model worked again posing nude ?

i jrked off to this

Women do write some erotic stories.

Two "boys" go into the bathroom and two girls come out. Hey, that's clever! Good story, enjoyed it,. 4 stars.

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I always think of the model Cherie Deville when I read this magnificent story. I think she'd fit in perfectly to the role.

Helped me to O 3 times in 5 minutes.

Great story, definitely needs a follow-up