Its not fair I put so much into writing stories and you come along with your new story and totaly eclipse mine, if you weren't so great at writing i'd be annoyed with you for that (lol),
Well another great story from a great writer and I bet others will want to read your other stories too if they have sence and haven't already.
Not only a marvalously inventive plot, it was so masterfully executed it left the reader dying to be on the plane to follow the two ladies home. And the final scene with the strap on....Jesus...a man (or woman) ought to make sure they get a checkup before reading it to make sure their heart can take it!!Stardog
Oh my, each page better than the predecessor. Fantastic, the two of us, she well into her 50's and I am well into my 60's thoroghly enjoyed and became very much aroused with the stories.
She only wished she could emulate the goings on... I wish she could too so I could watch. LOL
I just wanted to say a BIG THANK YOU to everyone who has read my story, posted such complimentary public comments and sent me feedback. I do appreciate it very much and I also value your support.
I always reply to feedback, but just wanted to take this opportunity as well, to thank those who have sent it anonymously.
I have read many stories at this site and this is among the best. You have done a wonderful job with all aspects of writing. The story line, pace, character interaction, editing, and everything else that changes a soso story into a GREAT ONE.
Green Gem never fails to write a captivating highly sensual story! Her charachters are always beleivable ordinary people! The sex and lovemaking is always primal, erotic, wild, and beautiful. I came away from this feeling like i'd been there----Thank you, Green Gem!
One of the all-time greats. I do hope that you continue this one a little further between the mother and daughter. Thanks for the Great reading..
by
Anonymous02/06/04
read this only if you want to get turned on
Hi Gem,
You did it to me again. I Had to stop 4x to come. I haven't done that since I read you story about the marriage therapy resort. I realy like how you slowly, step by step, transformed Paula and Chloe into the wanton sex explorers they had buried under their culture and rules of society. Best Wishes Always
Bravo! Your story was well written and very hot! A well thought out story that was a pleasure to read! Thank you so much for sharing! I look forward to more of your stories!
I came to the end of the story and it felt like I was emerging from a dream. My mouth was dry, my heart was pounding, and the fabric of my pants was trying to keep me civil. I had been totally transported into a world apart from the office that was sitting in. This story is better than any movie that I have seen in years. Awesome!!!
by
Anonymous02/26/04
Remarkable writing
I'm so impressed with the style and clearly well planned story - a wonderful tale and extremely well (and erotically) developed. After a couple years of dropping by Literotica, I've found a favourite author!
a wonderful job of sexual storytelling that has everything you'd ever want. very well planned, and patiently told and developed to a crescendo of passion. greengem is a star in the making...
That was the most erotic and arousing story I have ever read. You have an incredible mastery of eroticism. Thank you!
by
Anonymous01/28/05
A wonderful read
Your writing is so intoxicating, this was best erotic story i have read to date. this is the first one of yours I have read , but I promise to read all of your works you have posted.
by
Anonymous02/10/05
The best story I have read on this site
My next hope is to buy an airline ticket to Denmark! What a great job of describing it and the people in your story. It was hot through out. You should right this stuff for a living.
I was so glad to see your name among the winners! I love how your mind works in your writing, you are so in touch with your characters. Your ability to describe the sights,smells, sounds of sex also sets you apart from the rest. You are gifted, and thanks for sharing! You really should submit some of your work to the marketplace. You could retire in that place "where the sun always shines"
Take care, and I always look forward to seeing your newest efforts.
Mike
by
Anonymous06/13/06
Amazing
This story is completely hot and entirely immersive. You really feel like you are a part of the story. Everything feels so real-to-life. Great story, I look forward to more.
A "winner" for sure. I did the European thing when I was in the service, including a run through Holland, and Denmark. Americans are only about a century behind them as to our own ridiculous sexual prudery. GUILT is our mantra! Think on this...the USA ranks NUMBER ONE in the amount and range of violent sexual assaults WORLD WIDE! And each generation that comes along ADDS to the totals! I have grandchildren and my kids have decided to make sex and sexual feelings a normal topic of concern as they bring up their kids. No...they aren't exposed to our adult vision of that subject. Rather, they are encouraged to discuss their feelings, both physical, and emotional, with their parents, as openly as they choose. They are not encouraged or discouraged either way. They learn about themselves in an open, fresh, and guiltless environment. The most important word to describe all this is RESPONSIBILITY, and RESPECT. Be responsible in all matters public and private, and always treat others (male and female) with humane respect. DUMP the guilt...Just choose to LIVE happily and SAFELY.
OK...enough of that...the story. It deservedly won the best incest story of 2004. Enough said...
by
Anonymous08/28/06
Outstanding!
I've read hundreds of stories on this site and quite frankly for every good one there are 20 that stink. This story is simply the best I've read on Literotica. Great characterization meshed with fantastically hot, erotic sex. And the incest aspect is hot and compelling without the ick factor.
Keep it up!
by
Anonymous08/29/06
you owe ne
you will be hearing from my solicitor.. you gave me a damn heart attack... thank you and.. please compose often :):):)
The word pictures and detailed descriptions where what made this for me. Sinful man that I am, I wish I could have watched that last scene on the hotel bed.
by
Anonymous10/04/06
a loving encounter
Green_Gem that was a well written story and the describing of Amsterdam incredible the red light areas was great me Myself have been and lived in England was a great country to live in i never got a chance to goto amsterdam.
I hope you will continue with with this story I think Paula and Chloe are incredible mother and daughter combo .
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga
by
Anonymous06/12/07
best story Ive Read to date 6/12 07
This was so hot I made me hope it was a true storie and if it was'nt I never want to know a new fan keep the story going
by
Anonymous09/22/07
Wow!
The idea is so off centre that it could be sick and wierd, but the progression and the relationship are so believable as to pull the reader in to it and push ones own boundaries. Very cleverly done and particularly well written. In a class of its own.
Anyway, you described the center of this beautiful city just as it is, I always like it when I'm there (because I live a few kilometers to the south east, so I hardly ever get there).
by
Anonymous09/11/08
Best story ever!
OMFG that was a turn-on! All I can say is mmmm Jesus fucking goddamned Christ! Made a fucking pervert out of me!
Thanks for the great story and correct spelling and usage of "taut." I'm not a grammar Nazi, but that is one of my pet peeves. You have renewed my faith in humanity, LOL!
I really enjoyed this story and gave it 5 stars, i would liked it to have more of a build up to them getting together, possibly some slow seduction as that is where it seemed to be heading, but still very enjoyable. Thank you
Very good ! Very Hot !! I would only prefer if it also had some trib action between mother and daughter (pussy grinding to pussy)
by
Anonymous01/09/17
Very hot, but the math sucks.
"It was one of the largest vibrating dildos with a length of around ten to twelve inches and advertised as having a starting diameter at the tip of three inches but thickening out along the shaft to around five inches in circumference."
Looks like the author is innocent of the meanings of basic terms like diameter and circumference (US education system?).
A "a starting diameter at the tip of three inches" is huge for a penis. Then, "thickening out along the shaft to around five inches in circumference" makes no sense. Five inches in circumference means about 1.6 inches in diameter, certainly not "thickening" from three inches. Surely the weirdest looking cock ever. Any eight grader would be confused about this math. Looks like the author is as well.
English
This isn't fair
Its not fair I put so much into writing stories and you come along with your new story and totaly eclipse mine, if you weren't so great at writing i'd be annoyed with you for that (lol),
Well another great story from a great writer and I bet others will want to read your other stories too if they have sence and haven't already.
A stroke of genious
Not only a marvalously inventive plot, it was so masterfully executed it left the reader dying to be on the plane to follow the two ladies home. And the final scene with the strap on....Jesus...a man (or woman) ought to make sure they get a checkup before reading it to make sure their heart can take it!!Stardog
SATIATED
Oh my, each page better than the predecessor. Fantastic, the two of us, she well into her 50's and I am well into my 60's thoroghly enjoyed and became very much aroused with the stories.
She only wished she could emulate the goings on... I wish she could too so I could watch. LOL
Simply Sin_sational!
Beautifully told and exceptionally hot! Thank you for the wonderful trip to Amsterdam, and the sexual awakening between these two beautiful women.
THANK YOU
I just wanted to say a BIG THANK YOU to everyone who has read my story, posted such complimentary public comments and sent me feedback. I do appreciate it very much and I also value your support.
I always reply to feedback, but just wanted to take this opportunity as well, to thank those who have sent it anonymously.
Green_Gem
One of the B E S T
I have read many stories at this site and this is among the best. You have done a wonderful job with all aspects of writing. The story line, pace, character interaction, editing, and everything else that changes a soso story into a GREAT ONE.
Job very well done.
Green Gem gets better and better!
Green Gem never fails to write a captivating highly sensual story! Her charachters are always beleivable ordinary people! The sex and lovemaking is always primal, erotic, wild, and beautiful. I came away from this feeling like i'd been there----Thank you, Green Gem!
An exciting story
Green_Gem has written a really exciting story.
100% "Fantastic"
One of the all-time greats. I do hope that you continue this one a little further between the mother and daughter. Thanks for the Great reading..
read this only if you want to get turned on
Hi Gem,
You did it to me again. I Had to stop 4x to come. I haven't done that since I read you story about the marriage therapy resort. I realy like how you slowly, step by step, transformed Paula and Chloe into the wanton sex explorers they had buried under their culture and rules of society. Best Wishes Always
ABSOLUTLY ONE OF THE BEST!
Bravo! Your story was well written and very hot! A well thought out story that was a pleasure to read! Thank you so much for sharing! I look forward to more of your stories!
wow
:-0
Textually Transmitted Aphrodisiac!
I came to the end of the story and it felt like I was emerging from a dream. My mouth was dry, my heart was pounding, and the fabric of my pants was trying to keep me civil. I had been totally transported into a world apart from the office that was sitting in. This story is better than any movie that I have seen in years. Awesome!!!
Remarkable writing
I'm so impressed with the style and clearly well planned story - a wonderful tale and extremely well (and erotically) developed. After a couple years of dropping by Literotica, I've found a favourite author!
Wow
This was fucking hot
wonderful...
a wonderful job of sexual storytelling that has everything you'd ever want. very well planned, and patiently told and developed to a crescendo of passion. greengem is a star in the making...
thanks for sharing your talent.
WOW!
That was the most erotic and arousing story I have ever read. You have an incredible mastery of eroticism. Thank you!
A wonderful read
Your writing is so intoxicating, this was best erotic story i have read to date. this is the first one of yours I have read , but I promise to read all of your works you have posted.
The best story I have read on this site
My next hope is to buy an airline ticket to Denmark! What a great job of describing it and the people in your story. It was hot through out. You should right this stuff for a living.
Congrats on your win!
I was so glad to see your name among the winners! I love how your mind works in your writing, you are so in touch with your characters. Your ability to describe the sights,smells, sounds of sex also sets you apart from the rest. You are gifted, and thanks for sharing! You really should submit some of your work to the marketplace. You could retire in that place "where the sun always shines"
Take care, and I always look forward to seeing your newest efforts.
Mike
Amazing
This story is completely hot and entirely immersive. You really feel like you are a part of the story. Everything feels so real-to-life. Great story, I look forward to more.
A second read
A "winner" for sure. I did the European thing when I was in the service, including a run through Holland, and Denmark. Americans are only about a century behind them as to our own ridiculous sexual prudery. GUILT is our mantra! Think on this...the USA ranks NUMBER ONE in the amount and range of violent sexual assaults WORLD WIDE! And each generation that comes along ADDS to the totals! I have grandchildren and my kids have decided to make sex and sexual feelings a normal topic of concern as they bring up their kids. No...they aren't exposed to our adult vision of that subject. Rather, they are encouraged to discuss their feelings, both physical, and emotional, with their parents, as openly as they choose. They are not encouraged or discouraged either way. They learn about themselves in an open, fresh, and guiltless environment. The most important word to describe all this is RESPONSIBILITY, and RESPECT. Be responsible in all matters public and private, and always treat others (male and female) with humane respect. DUMP the guilt...Just choose to LIVE happily and SAFELY.
OK...enough of that...the story. It deservedly won the best incest story of 2004. Enough said...
Outstanding!
I've read hundreds of stories on this site and quite frankly for every good one there are 20 that stink. This story is simply the best I've read on Literotica. Great characterization meshed with fantastically hot, erotic sex. And the incest aspect is hot and compelling without the ick factor.
Keep it up!
you owe ne
you will be hearing from my solicitor.. you gave me a damn heart attack... thank you and.. please compose often :):):)
Eye Candy
The word pictures and detailed descriptions where what made this for me. Sinful man that I am, I wish I could have watched that last scene on the hotel bed.
a loving encounter
Green_Gem that was a well written story and the describing of Amsterdam incredible the red light areas was great me Myself have been and lived in England was a great country to live in i never got a chance to goto amsterdam.
I hope you will continue with with this story I think Paula and Chloe are incredible mother and daughter combo .
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga
best story Ive Read to date 6/12 07
This was so hot I made me hope it was a true storie and if it was'nt I never want to know a new fan keep the story going
Wow!
The idea is so off centre that it could be sick and wierd, but the progression and the relationship are so believable as to pull the reader in to it and push ones own boundaries. Very cleverly done and particularly well written. In a class of its own.
Amsterdam is in Holland, damn it!
Stupid Americans, get your topography right.
Anyway, you described the center of this beautiful city just as it is, I always like it when I'm there (because I live a few kilometers to the south east, so I hardly ever get there).
Best story ever!
OMFG that was a turn-on! All I can say is mmmm Jesus fucking goddamned Christ! Made a fucking pervert out of me!
f.o
darkbee f.o
Loved it
This was a great read :)
Great read
Nice work... BTW it's geography darkbee... gee-ogg-raa-fee!
Great story
Incredibly erotic, and very well written. Deserving of the award.
Beautiful
Wow, well written and very, very sexy indeed! I look forward to reading more of your stories. You have a stunning imagination.
Wow!
Thanks for giving me a very wet tummy! :)
sasa
good story, u have a very vivid imagination
french
It's ma cherie when speaking to a woman. Mon cheri if speaking to a guy.
Great Story
I loved this story :) it made me soooo wet~
Fantastic
Tremendous job!
Probably should have used the new relationship to bring Dad out of his workaholic routine.
Excellent, but too short
Thanks for the great story and correct spelling and usage of "taut." I'm not a grammar Nazi, but that is one of my pet peeves. You have renewed my faith in humanity, LOL!
fab !!!
grate incest story if dad is to into work why note be happy. mom and daughter get that fuck machine just love the story TYleannxxxx
mom
Loved this story.It made me think how I would loved to have fucked and played with and sucked on her tits.
More Please
Really enjoyed reading this story would like go read more.
Great story
I really enjoyed this story and gave it 5 stars, i would liked it to have more of a build up to them getting together, possibly some slow seduction as that is where it seemed to be heading, but still very enjoyable. Thank you
Amazing
This is my first read of your work. IT was amazing. I love the way that Paula and Chloe make love and fuck each other. Well DONE.
Meh.
Probably the most boring incest story I've ever read. Oh well.
Neal - Review
Very good ! Very Hot !! I would only prefer if it also had some trib action between mother and daughter (pussy grinding to pussy)
Very hot, but the math sucks.
"It was one of the largest vibrating dildos with a length of around ten to twelve inches and advertised as having a starting diameter at the tip of three inches but thickening out along the shaft to around five inches in circumference."
Looks like the author is innocent of the meanings of basic terms like diameter and circumference (US education system?).
A "a starting diameter at the tip of three inches" is huge for a penis. Then, "thickening out along the shaft to around five inches in circumference" makes no sense. Five inches in circumference means about 1.6 inches in diameter, certainly not "thickening" from three inches. Surely the weirdest looking cock ever. Any eight grader would be confused about this math. Looks like the author is as well.
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