A Little Stretch Never Hurt Anybody

Did you even pass English class?
Horrible flow and punctuation makes it so hard to read.

You REALLY need an editor.

This obviously wasn't even read a second time. Awful.

fabulous

fabulous story - reading it made me smile.

Run-on

A run-on is a sentence in which two *or more* independent clauses (i.e., complete sentences) are joined without an appropriate punctuation or conjunction

Hey! Enough with the stupid comments! This is an unbridled sex story. Grammar, punctuation doesn't mean shit if the writing illustrates what's happening. In fact, it reflects what's happening. Keep writing "stretching " stories. Loved it.
Uber stickler for grammar here.

Waste of time

Thank god it was short.

Liked it a lot

It read almost like stream of conciousness, it was hot and was, for me, a fairly realistic representation of a sexual scene. Ignore the haters and keep writing!

srupid + gay

i hated it u dick head

Totally confused

In the first paragraph, you write "...kiss your neck and rub your cock" then by the 4th paragraph, this person has a clit? Seems like the narrator was first having sex with a guy that changed into a girl? Actually, I think the narrator changed from the girl to the guy. This confusion detracts from the story because the reader is going "Huh?" Please get an editor.

Enough with the stupid comments?
How about enough of the stupid stories.

Danielle?

Are you the Danielle I remember? Mercy HS? This fantasy sounds so familiar...