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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/28/04

another story to make husbands look foolish

are most of the stories written by lesbians, seemslike majority of stories like this one, making husband look like a fool, even stories when woman is a slut, the author makes the husband a fool.

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by Anonymous03/08/06

Huh ???

This was just stipid. What was the point ????

I expected it to get at least somewhat erotic at some point but that never happened. (A true story maybe?)

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by Genny09/10/06

Not Stupid at all

This is not a stupid story nor has it necessarily been written by a lesbian. In my fantasies, (male,husband, father, businessman), I wish my wife would do something similar. I used the story to have a fuller fantasy. After she has locked me in she makes me serve her for years to come. This could have a sequel, or two.
I really liked the thought that a woman can be this controlling. Please write more.

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by Anonymous02/20/09

Another awful story

Why play him for the fool i don t get it awful story he will just cut himself free - oh well another very bad story . .

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by Anonymous12/13/09

clever ending enteresting read

write more really enjoyed this ,now you need to add a few more chapters. thanks 4 sharing!

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