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All Comments on 'Eye of the Beholder Ch. 01'

by Kundalinguini

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Little BirdLittle Birdabout 20 years ago
Wooah!

Wooah! Waiting for the next part! :D

sugarpussysugarpussyabout 20 years ago
Ohhh baby

I'm wishing my bathroom wasn't on the 3rd floor now.

sybilrosesybilroseabout 20 years ago
Great word pictures

I loved it and I want more

hongluobohongluoboabout 20 years ago
nice start

love the atmospherics... the lilac bushes.... but yes... it does leave us waiting for more

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 18 years ago
The scent

of lust is sweet. I love the attention to detail here. The gardenia, lilacs and sex nearly make me swoon. Wonderful writing.

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