An Anonymous Relationship

nice

enjoyable short story. would love a follow up.

good

There is much room for another chapter. It is a good story and would like to see more.

Pleeeaaase

Please continue this story. Absolutly fantastic. I wanna know what happens next!

keep it going

I'm so intrigued to know what comes next

More more

Good story, mostly good grammar, n a good tease. I may have to try this w my dad!!
Pls add more!
OneSilky

Nice

What a great story of how a loving daughter should treat her daddy. I look forward to part two where this loving daughter starts servicing her father on a regular basis. I hope they hookup at the porn shop a few times a week with daddy blowing his seed into his loving daughters womb two a three times a week and his daughter is not on birth control. When daddy finds out and is in shock that the tight new pussy belongs to his little girl she can then show him her baby bump and drop to her knees and suck his manhood like a good little girl. Eventually they will stop going to the porn shop and can instead christen the home with incest sex. By the time mommy knows what is happening she will be a grandma, imagine her shock when she wakes at night to strange moans and grunts and no husband in the bed. She walks past her grand children's nursery and when she opens her 21 year old daughters bedroom door there's her husband and daughter. Daddy has his 7 month old daughter bent over the bed doggystyle hammering her from behind while his daughter moans in orgasm and begs daddy to fill her pussy. After getting caught dad will mount their daughter with ever increasing frequency such that when dad is not working he resides in his daughters bed.

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excellent details everything awesome details everything
spectacular details everything --- --- overall phenomenal .....................
1. : if father hasn't figured out that it's daughter just yet don't do
that yet keep going her leading him on doing stuff doing everything
remaining anonymous ..... 2. : what's happened about Stacy she's been
completely dropped after the beginning story sooooooooooooooo
possibly Heather tells Stacy about everything except fact
Heather's father as long as Stacy can keep mouth shut ... after this
Stacy now begins talking same man ooooopppppsssss you've never
really answered whom Stacy did cybersex the beginning the story
if it's not him Stacy now begins talking same man also doing
everything w/him possibly Heather sets things so she can watch
w/o them really knowing possibly even complete3some happening
some point ooooopppppsssss Heather only noticed her father's truck
outside building along w/him walking outside the building
so possibly not him inside boothe next her inside boothe inside building
soooooooooooooooo some point after her curiousness gets best her
she gives her father while they're tender moment the safewords
< i'll ask if you've got your daughter's panties . if you slide pair
pair panties through hole . i'll suck i'll fuck daddy cock > watch what
he does after this listen what he says after this

Brilliant

What a great story! Hurry it up with the part two, definitely looking forward to her figuring out a way to confront her dad.

Excellent

Smoking hot! Great story would really like to see this have at least a couple of chapters..

Short but hot

A great short work that is hot from start to finish and has amazing sequel potential. I hope to read more by you soon.

please carry on the series

Brilliant story great plot but please carry on the story you have written a great daddy daughter story

Oh my god

That was hilarious. Lol

Write more please love it so far

I started reading as soon as posted

But I never commented because I didn't have a profile. Just wanna say that I LOOPVE the way this story is going!

Yeah Right

This is very realistic. She lives in a Midwestern CITY, she goes to a community college, but she can't find any men her own are to screw! Okay. And frankly, literotica amazes me. In their efforts to be "socially relevant", they wouldn't dare allow a character under eighteen to appear in any of their stories. Yet they publish countless tales of rape, pillage, and a never ending supply of INCEST stories, ninety-percent of which are written by pervy white guys, who probably haven't been laid in real life since 1982! At least at other sites they don't pretend they're trying to bring legitimacy to freakin SMUT! As for your story... I'll give you an "E" for effort, but you FAIL at anything approaching realism!

So....

Porn should be realistic? Also... just because she can find guys to fuck, doesn't mean she necessarily wants them. I thought it was a great story, with a good build up and revelation. Can't wait for the next.