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A Day in the Life Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/18/15

Thanks for an early Xmas present....

Than you again for another excellent beginning of the case. Hope you and all have a GREAT and HAPPY Holidays..

JFPUCK111@ATT.NET

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by Pairadox12/18/15

Great Story, as usual

Although this one is almost too blatant, esp. with those chemicals - which makes me wonder if that's not intentional. Hmmmmm.... :-)

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by stbrn34812/19/15

Come on. ...Usually you are more devious

A transvestite who makes out with a Latino gang banger in front of his crew...
A list filled with a litany of cosmetic bases, outraged testosterone laden Macho fury on cam...removal of the offending organs....and no, I'm not claiming any more intelligence than the average shmoe who reads these tidbits
That's why I'm so surprised that it is so obvious
Still a good story
I know, free site notwithstanding, you must be battling the holiday rush trying to let one this obvious slip past...lol
Honest, we're willing to wait for the suspense to build because we enjoy your stories and truly appreciate your efforts

Happy Holidays

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by Anonymous12/19/15

great intro to next storyline.

pipeline for chemicals, from California, for superior bloodlines, to use in race wars, is what it sounds like to me. the victim was a mole, for the CIA, or FBI, and exposed, so he got terminated,. by the gang. and of course, the shadow man, is involved too..along with Thomas P. Cook. by; eg34904@gmail.com

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by LeFrog0812/23/15

Thanks for the Holiday Season gift!

But I have to agree, a bit obvious....the victim was a transvestite, mix in some latin machismo, and there's the case....

Happy Holidays to all!

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by Anonymous12/25/15

annony can't ever write his her it...IT's name so we know the asshole

of LIt can't write a story,. Gave it a 5

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