Inheritance Includes a Houseboy Ch. 03

The mixed use of 'asshole' and 'anus' spoilt the plot

I say this because in one of your paragraphs you quote, 'I lifted Jody by her hips so that her ass was perched in the air. Her head was still on the bed and she turned it to one side and let out a gasp as my tongue licked close to her asshole.' then you switch to, 'I ran my tongue from her pussy to her anus causing her to tingle and then spread her ass cheeks with my hands and dipped my tongue into the crack locating her nether hole.' Only to be followed by, 'I then pushed my tongue as far as I could into her asshole and I found myself needing to fuck her up the ass.'

Also the term 'asshole' is too guttural and is usually that given to a cretin and I'm sure Jody is no cretin.