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Fun story
Fun story, took a bit too long to develop. Keep writing!
:)
I hope it's true :) And you still haven't explained the English part here.. Were you insinuating that 'Trudi' is English? Anyway, I like your story's and hope that you are having fun writing them.. I am at least :) Cheers Yoron.
Fantastic
Thoroughly enjoyed this one:)
Broken Ankle
An interesting hook (ankle) and plot (erotic writer discovered) .A nice job of describing the physical features of the females, and a short description of the landscape. The dialogue was very good, and the kitchen scenes where Danny was tied to the chair added greatly to the story. The titty mash sandwich was a novel idea.
Much of the story was inner thoughts and narrative summary. The one sex scene was nicely done, but I would have preferred more. I liked the story a great deal.
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