All Comments on 'The Time Traveler's Mother'

kind of saw it cumming when he talked about his mom and dad

The story needed more details that would have given it more than a "PG" rating. Kind of a "Back To The Future," with a twist. Good science fiction, but not very stimulating.

I liked it very much. A bit disappointed that the entire seduction took place off story.

He must have had more contact with his mother when she was young. And maybe visit her through years. I miss that part....

And it's all a little bit rushed, the idea is good. I would suggest write it again, and this time a little bit longer, more details...