Three Square Meals Ch. 01

GOOD START

Looking forward to new installments

Liked it

will wait to read more

Very well done.

Well thought out, written, and presented.

"That's a good girl, take me in nice and deep"

I think I'm going to enjoy your story were of to a good start. I love good sci fi and wonder if anyone has tied on to star wars here on Lit. Well who dosent like their women to be nude, I do like a nice tan with or without tan lines, like I've ever seen that. What I do know is the pleasure of directing her down my cock when she says okay, just being average puts a lovely stain on their face.
More power Scotty, I'm giving her all I've got.

Top marks

I will add you to my list of authors to follow. I love your writing style. Keep up the good work.

After having read 15 chapters.

I am rereading these to get a better idea of what to expect because I really want to know what is going to happen, and strangely enough, from this one I want him to relate some of the story that sent him to Karron. Maybe after he does he will find out what the worm girls do with their hands that is so amazing.

He has a lot of fun but that has never been revealed.

No hook....

I'm really sorry, but this tale just didn't hook me. Right from the start it was hard to understand a lot of things. You know the characters and the universe you are writing in, but the reader does not.

To Lo_Pan:

That's a fair criticism I guess, I just didn't want to load up the first chapter with too much tedious exposition.

I go on to elaborate on everything I mention in later chapters, but if the first chapter didn't interest you, that's fair enough.

screw the critics,

Good beginning !
What critics won't understand is that writers write for themselves first and for the free reading public second. If they want a different story then they should write it.
I would like to be younger with a prostate and a libido to fuel it !
I enjoyed the start and look forward to the sequels!

Ok, I will give it a try

So far though it reads like SF out of the 1940's, though back then there was no
explicit sex.... and very little implicit.

Guide for new readers

This is the first story I've ever written, so you'll be able to see my style and technique change considerably over the six months I've released chapters so far.

Apologies for the punctuation mistakes in the earlier chapters, I was still learning the ropes! I have started going back and editing old chapters to fix the grammar and punctuation mistakes, but its a gradual process while I'm still writing new chapters.

Things start to heat up by Chapter 05, with lots more sub-plots added in subsequent chapters as the action intensifies.

Anyway, hope you enjoy it.

Tefler

Still great stuff

Hey Tefler,

I'm going back and re-reading the entire series, and I'm still loving it. Glad to see you investing the energy in making the earlier chapters more readable. Let me encourage any readers who have doubts: KEEP going - this is a GREAT series!!

Very good indeed.

I skipped past the preamble and got stuck into the juicy bit and I liked it very much! Bloody good description.

Looking forward to Chapter 62

I come back and reread earlier chapters quite often because this story is fantastic.

I am thinking that Patreon is going to be worthwhile way for readers to tip you going forward as you wrap up this story and start your next one.

60 chapters a year is crazy pace. It must be a million words.

The number of addicted readers that comment they check every day just for your next Chapter; plus the $500 a chapter that your Patreon seems to be headed for on it's way up means you should have a $30k hobby at least if you stick with it. I hope you stick with it. I hope you publish as well because you are obviously meant to be a writer.

Doing some Recon

Just doing some recon, such an amazing story
JC

The Literotica "Game of Thrones"

Note to beginning readers. This is the first chapter of an epic story that I think equates to the Literotica Game of Thrones. Having just finished chapter 64 and am now rereading some earlier chapters are waiting for more to be posted. Enjoy.

a discovery

been reading this for a year. From the start of the first part of the crew and then learning about the worlds and races. The development of skills, ships, weapons, and the development of the characters is a great story to follow.
This has been well worth the reads (yes, I have read it a couple of times).
Keep it up Tefler

Without a doubt, the best combination of SciFi, Erotica, and a tweak of D/s I have ever read

Folks, you are in for treat. This story is an avalanche. It just gets better with every chapter. It starts out like many, but just keeps getting better and better. I am currently up to chapter 65 and anxiously awaiting the next installment, so I started over from the beginning.
YOU WILL NOT REGRET THE TIME YOU SPEND READING THIS STORY.

Well worth it

I echo the sentiments of the others here who are saying this is worth the read. So for all those who are just now discovering this story, reading for the first time (I'm now starting my second read thru), stick with it. Trust me, you'll soon be wanting to throw money at Tefler to keep it going. And good thing too, he has a way for you to do it! Check out his Patreon page, where he posts new chapters the same day he submits them to Lit, which means patrons get to read the chapter a few days before it shows up on Lit. This story is currently up to chapter 67, with 68 due in a few days, and things are awesome!

So keep reading (check out the comments too, they're quite lively) and join the family of 3SM addicts!

My name is Jim and I'm a 3SM addict that felt good to say lol

I'm on my 5th read through I too patron tefler it's worth it to keep him writing.
Keep reading it's addictive it makes you lose sleep as you don't want to stop it grabs you by your quad and won't let go haha the characters are lovable and you get to know each one bit by bit it's an epic journey through space with lots of love fights and battles which blow you away with how they are portrayed.
Honestly keep reading and if you can spare a few dollars go to patron and sponsor him you will want to if you stick with it for 4-5 chapters and you too will be addicted too just like hundreds of other people.

Enjoy the adventure!

While awaiting the release of new TSM chapter, I got antsy and decided to start reading the story from the beginning. Tefler says his writing has improved a lot. I have to say his early chapters are still terrific and has drawn me into the story with a new found appreciation.

For the TSM newbies, don't let the number of chapters intimidate you. Just put on your seatbelts and enjoy the adventure.

--JP --