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Steve doesn't deserve Heather
This is a cute story, funny and mildly erotic at the same time. Giving one pause and thinking before hitting the e-mail send button is a good lesson to learn. I only hope that all the readers take heed and learn from Steve's error. But he still doen't deserve a smart lady like Heather.
Dear Laurel,
Destroy all the pictures of me.
Let's leave with that.
wheres the sex?
would have been much better if it was even slightly erotic, the idea behind its good tho
Funny n sweet
Og,
Nice idea. I like it because it's so compact. No extra words. The humour gets extra points.
To the previous person who commented - the sex is hidden. :p
Witty Thinking Pays Well
Nice Story, Seems More or less like a Real Incident Just missed a bit of the romance, but the wittyness Covered the missing parts.
Bowls along...
I loved this clever little story. I like the way it races along, the pace matching the urgent need to "save" Steve.
quite clever.....
and well deserving of the "E". Bravo!
From across the world
Phenomenal
Brings home the universality of festivals
Irrespective of race, religion, location
Valentine from Hell!
Thinking he is sending his girlfriend an E-valentine he mistakenly sends it to everyone in the Office. Panic ensues as his girlfriend uses all her clever manipulations to make sure he doesn't get fired. Hey - Works for me! Wild and Wacky Great Read. Ogg does it - one more time!
Hit the ground running, never slowed down! WOW!
The story ran like a rocket & went at top speed. The though short was gripping, & is of high intensity, creative and unique. Not much plot development, but it was not needed. The lady's quick mind, and take charge attitude, made it totally unecessary. Her beau's passive, foggy reponses were a perfect foil to the lady. The story is spare but that's its strength. The tempo took care of that. Great characterisation, novel plot.
Sex? there's plenty of sex, but most of it is found between the lines. Sex was suffused throughout the whole story. (other stories, at this site, have how-to sex descriptions). The story is brilliant.
Your writing is excellent.
Thank you for a great read.
Dan.
Magic
A very well-told story: And highly satisfactory!
HP
Excuse me but where's the romance?
I'm sorry but didn't like it much since I was looking for a different type story. Although, somewhat humorous, I was exasperated by the fit into this category. Thanks for your effort.
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