by oggbashan
This is a cute story, funny and mildly erotic at the same time. Giving one pause and thinking before hitting the e-mail send button is a good lesson to learn. I only hope that all the readers take heed and learn from Steve's error. But he still doen't deserve a smart lady like Heather.
would have been much better if it was even slightly erotic, the idea behind its good tho
Og,
Nice idea. I like it because it's so compact. No extra words. The humour gets extra points.
To the previous person who commented - the sex is hidden. :p
Nice Story, Seems More or less like a Real Incident Just missed a bit of the romance, but the wittyness Covered the missing parts.
I loved this clever little story. I like the way it races along, the pace matching the urgent need to "save" Steve.
Phenomenal
Brings home the universality of festivals
Irrespective of race, religion, location
Thinking he is sending his girlfriend an E-valentine he mistakenly sends it to everyone in the Office. Panic ensues as his girlfriend uses all her clever manipulations to make sure he doesn't get fired. Hey - Works for me! Wild and Wacky Great Read. Ogg does it - one more time!
The story ran like a rocket & went at top speed. The though short was gripping, & is of high intensity, creative and unique. Not much plot development, but it was not needed. The lady's quick mind, and take charge attitude, made it totally unecessary. Her beau's passive, foggy reponses were a perfect foil to the lady. The story is spare but that's its strength. The tempo took care of that. Great characterisation, novel plot.
Sex? there's plenty of sex, but most of it is found between the lines. Sex was suffused throughout the whole story. (other stories, at this site, have how-to sex descriptions). The story is brilliant.
Your writing is excellent.
Thank you for a great read.
Dan.
I'm sorry but didn't like it much since I was looking for a different type story. Although, somewhat humorous, I was exasperated by the fit into this category. Thanks for your effort.