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by Max HeadroomNZL02/04/04

excellent start

Please continue ... this has the makings of a series of chapters and is hot keep it up wicked

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by Anonymous02/04/04

encore!

This was very romantic and endearing. Very nicely writen with excellent imagery to it. Also a very nicely wrapped together theme that held together through the entire story. Nothing but "wow" to say really.

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