Do like the suggestion of her being bred by one of her co workers, albeit janitor, security guard or anybody ! Maybe having one of the Haitians impregnate her would reinforce her new level ?
Sure you haven't forgotten her Haitian nanny and will be making sure she is well served in later chapter(s) ?
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Anonymous12/21/15
Drop the "it's a true story" crap and just try and write a decent story
The minute you allude to a story being true or based on true events we all start laughing. This is a porn site. On the world wide web. No one believes a word coming out of your mouth or off the pages. And whether or not it is true or not, stating that adds absolutely nothing to the story. The only thing that matters is if you manage to spin an entertaining story. In this case, you haven't done anything that could be considered original, clever or fun to read. Try again. This is a "1".
Say awhatever you want Sil, this asshole of Lit is crying and bitching again sweetie
Tell him to kiss your ass after you dump on his face. Gave you a 5 to help offset the fag annony!
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Anonymous12/22/15
Very nice
As I have expressed in other comments, I enjoy reading your stories and always look forward to reading your post when I get some alone time away from a busy day, hubbie and kids. Thank you for writing.
It caters to a certain kind of fetish and it does so extremely well. Suspension of disbelief is important, even in porn, and this story stretches it to the limit or even beyond, but I simply didn't mind, since it was so very, very hot.
I would have liked if the husband joined in earlier, but I just love the idea of two subs encouraging each other to give in to their base sexual urges and allow themselves to be the hedonistic sexual animals they truly crave to be. I'd like to get to that level myself.
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Anonymous12/22/15
1*
VOTE 1* FOR EVERY DEAR ANNONY COMMENT BY VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2! OR WHATEVER YOU CALL YOURSELF! HOPEFULLY YOUR AIDS WILL DO ITS JOB SOON!!!
Love the way story headed with both now being cum sluts for any and every dick, pussy, dildo or whatever....maybe some dogs? Thanks again, you're a great writer of erotic lit.
English
Loved it
This chapter was the best of this series.
Ever improving story
Do like the suggestion of her being bred by one of her co workers, albeit janitor, security guard or anybody ! Maybe having one of the Haitians impregnate her would reinforce her new level ?
Sure you haven't forgotten her Haitian nanny and will be making sure she is well served in later chapter(s) ?
Drop the "it's a true story" crap and just try and write a decent story
The minute you allude to a story being true or based on true events we all start laughing. This is a porn site. On the world wide web. No one believes a word coming out of your mouth or off the pages. And whether or not it is true or not, stating that adds absolutely nothing to the story. The only thing that matters is if you manage to spin an entertaining story. In this case, you haven't done anything that could be considered original, clever or fun to read. Try again. This is a "1".
Say awhatever you want Sil, this asshole of Lit is crying and bitching again sweetie
Tell him to kiss your ass after you dump on his face. Gave you a 5 to help offset the fag annony!
Very nice
As I have expressed in other comments, I enjoy reading your stories and always look forward to reading your post when I get some alone time away from a busy day, hubbie and kids. Thank you for writing.
Loved this one
It caters to a certain kind of fetish and it does so extremely well. Suspension of disbelief is important, even in porn, and this story stretches it to the limit or even beyond, but I simply didn't mind, since it was so very, very hot.
Your handling of the dialogue is supreme, btw.
Keep on rockin'
Be a slut and give in to your depraved urges
I would have liked if the husband joined in earlier, but I just love the idea of two subs encouraging each other to give in to their base sexual urges and allow themselves to be the hedonistic sexual animals they truly crave to be. I'd like to get to that level myself.
1*
VOTE 1* FOR EVERY DEAR ANNONY COMMENT BY VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2! OR WHATEVER YOU CALL YOURSELF! HOPEFULLY YOUR AIDS WILL DO ITS JOB SOON!!!
Great Work
As usual
very hot
You are an excellent writer this chapter was dripping with the kind of taboo that I love great job keep it up.
I give you a 5
Love the way story headed with both now being cum sluts for any and every dick, pussy, dildo or whatever....maybe some dogs? Thanks again, you're a great writer of erotic lit.
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