the story was very hot! I thought the women character was awesome in her discription of how she felt during the whole experience. The feelings she described were both sensual and sexual. Through the story she was the same and did a great job describing the male. She showed a great "desire" for both sides of him....very hot!
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Amazing!
Insatiable, you never cease to amaze me! Keep up the great work!!
very hot - bpth sides
the story was very hot! I thought the women character was awesome in her discription of how she felt during the whole experience. The feelings she described were both sensual and sexual. Through the story she was the same and did a great job describing the male. She showed a great "desire" for both sides of him....very hot!
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I felt that I was Steve and I was inside you
Your writing is so vivid ,so real, that I feel I never want to stop reading
You are a very sexy writer
this is romance?
Please place your writing under the correct section. This was not a romance story by any stretch of the imagination.
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