All Comments on 'Three Square Meals Ch. 002'

Nice story, I'm enjoying it so far. Chapters could be a bit longer tho.

I wondered if he was ever going to take Alyssa to dinner. Something other than man gravy. We might be in deep space, he's still gonna find his self in deep shit.

This chapter, as well as the previous one, is well thought out, written, and presented. Keep up the good work.

This is my second time going over this story againg and I must say its even better the second time....my advice to all new readers keep reading you won't be disappointed...trust me on that

Straight into the action which was brilliantly described, I loved it!

Keep reading this story it gets better and better I'm on chapter 70 part one and thought I'd start again for the 5th time that's how exceptional this epic story is top marks tefler

But enjoyed by women. At least one. Lol. Really love this story. Thank you. Dawn

That said that women don't cum from giving oral, my wife does. She's also a screamer, so two-for-two. Working on the trifecta still though.

We all know that it is exceptional to the point of not likely in any way for normal female response to be this extreme to giving oral sex.

For now just let it stand as fiction, because yes it is noticeable and even flagrantly disinformation if you are looking for examples of HUMAN sexual experience.

You were meant to notice and think "That is weird!" so...

That is as close to a spoiler as you get from me.

FatherSin

PS This story is catnip for angry feminists looking for a fight. That says so much about the ones looking for a fight. This is really just a story. Fiction is by definition not true.

This is great and unique story. Your story is the reason to login after a long time. I am here to vote for you dear author.

This story handles it's female characters wayyy better than other stories of this genre. It's not hardcore feminist , and would most certainly fail the "bechdel test" ,it's still a great story with extremely well developed female characters.

Little early to really have an opinion of this story.

But I always get a little laugh when stories like this say the guy has a huge dick and massive balls, because realistically that would be so incredibly uncomfortable and chances are you'd probably sit on them.

The basis of a good plot and exciting adventures, has been laid. Intriguing start.

Someone opined earlier that the chapters could be a little longer. Careful what you wish for. U might be up all night reading a "page turner" which this story is.

John carried her a second time to the guest room and marveled at how light she was. She didn't lose weight so he must be getting stronger and don't know it. Interesting ....

Well I'm reading this again , and enjoying it again .

Why would she feel lighter?

Boost in motivation or 'Alien Instinct' kicking in?

He is certainly a very pleased man.

Thanks for this sexy chapter :)

Rolling along nicely

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Well she won't ever need to go hungry again." he smiled to himself, as he stretched contentedly.

A happy and full belly, yes, ... but nutrition? John and Alyssa knew nothing, at that time, about how well or how long she could survive on that 'High Protein Diet', they were just guessing and going with what felt good, .... but didn't the Fools Golds' medicine cabinet at least have some vitamins? ... and John's a good cook who now has someone to cook for, ... he should be feeding her at least one big meal a day, in addition to his Quad's contribution to her diet, ... right? But this story's Author knows better, so what we get doesn't make a lot of sense, to 21st century readers of erotic fiction, like us, .... However, despite my nitpicks, this tale is a very fun trip into the 28th century, ... I am loving it so far, .... ;-) ttfn

patiently waiting for the yellow N