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Good read!
This story has a lot of potential!! I'm excited to see where you're going with it! Keep writing!
Well Written
Good story line and well written for the first story. Keep it going and please don't make us wait!
Your story
This has endless possibilities to go wth. Just a quick note to yourself. This is your story to do with as you want. Take advice, but in the end you have to be happy with your story.
Good start
Good start to the story as it has a lot of potential - looking forward to reading more. ..
Please do continue
As a first story in a series it has nice promise, please do continue
Good potential. I gusta so far.
Great start. More, please!
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