Excellent. My favorite genre: In Public, with hardly anything to cover.
Very nice telling. You were right to feel the way you did, tied and suddenly bare to the world. When was the cape replaced, there at the bar, or just before you left the building? And was it buttoned on the way home?
Oh, and a teeny quibble: I clicked to read, envisioning a cap on your head. A little typo, not to alter my "5" for you. It's okay, I've discovered my own typos after publication. You can resubmit quickly and the editors will correct for you.
Thank you for your tale.
R.
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Anonymous06/08/16
We need more
Wonderful story very erotic, we need more!!!!
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Anonymous06/09/16
Love its
We need sequel, prequel ...
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Anonymous01/07/17
Intense
Another great adventure that was very well described. This would be a fun one to finish. -Mark
This would of made a very special episode of Cheers. Where everybody would know your name.
Excellent. My favorite genre: In Public, with hardly anything to cover.
Very nice telling. You were right to feel the way you did, tied and suddenly bare to the world. When was the cape replaced, there at the bar, or just before you left the building? And was it buttoned on the way home?
Oh, and a teeny quibble: I clicked to read, envisioning a cap on your head. A little typo, not to alter my "5" for you. It's okay, I've discovered my own typos after publication. You can resubmit quickly and the editors will correct for you.
Thank you for your tale.
R.
We need more
Wonderful story very erotic, we need more!!!!
Love its
We need sequel, prequel ...
Intense
Another great adventure that was very well described. This would be a fun one to finish. -Mark
Hi Kara
Hi Kara , any plan to continue this story?
Follow-up
I don't have any plans to continue this story, although it was fun to write so you may see this pair again :-)
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