How I Became a Nudist Ch. 01

I liked this story.

I think it would have been much better without the introduction. By stating up front that the characters are "not meant to be realistic", you immediately take away from the story. I appreciate your honesty and understand if your intent is to not offend true nudists. The statement about you not wanting to blow farm animals was also unnecessary.

Having said that, the final paragraphs were very exciting. You fantasized about being totally naked and allowing others to see every inch of your body. The fantasy is not unrealistic. I am looking forward to your next story.

a nice start....and then?

Really strange

And long enough to be an opening paragraph. Where's the story?

Curious

But not funny. I'll keep reading...

I'm really intrigued by this character, and what you have so far is pretty well written. But I hope there's more coming (you call it Chapter 1 so that's a good sign) because there's not really much of a story with her yet. Looking forward to more!

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Please ignore previous comment. It was intended for a different story.