by daddieslildarlin
Story needs more detail and especially some finality!
Finish it!
Great story it goes well with the rest and I can't wait to read the rest of it.
Try to make your stories a little longer....They are too much of a tease right now for me...
The story is fantastic so far, but it's time to lengthen the chapters a bit, i think. That's the only complaint I have though!
I agree with the others, this is a major tease so far, but a very good one!!! I would love to read more - and make it a little longer, it won't hurt to go deeper!
thank you for this story i love father/daughter stuff after a couple chapters more maybe she could become pregnant with her daddies baby ... otherwise you stories are really hot thanks
Did daddieslildalin go off on a tangent and forgot about the promised Chapter 4??? This was a good start on a tempting story but the ending is still out in left field