All Comments on 'Everything About You'

Beautiful love story, extremely well-written. Hope to read more!

Hot sweaty sex is great fun, but when combined with the romance of true love, it is soooo good. Thanks for the great read Lucky!

Wonderfully written, from beginning to end.

Reading this made me smile. Once again, this story felt very personal. You could have been writing about me. I'm impressed. Keep it up.

I very much enjoyed the glimpse into this couple's life together!

I don't think luck had anything to do with the story I just read, other than that I was so lucky to have seen and read it. This is not just a very good story but also very excellent writing ability. Thank you for writing this and sharing it.

That was such a beatiful story!!

So well written, you could practically feel every heartbeat, every touch.

You are an amazing writer lucky! I can't wait to read more of your stories!! Just, Wow!! ;-)

Great love story written as pure poetry. Loved the feisty little Becca, and how she and Savanna adored one another. Superb writing, painting great pictures with words. You're very gifted Lucky

Aww, this is so sweet and sexy. I loved the romance and the love story between the two women. You made them come alive. You are very talented!

This was absolutely lovely! Most of the erotic stories I've read were about sex and only sex, but the way you incorporated actual love in your stories made my heart flutter!

woah! that was amazing well done

This story is phenomenal. It's so much more than a story about sex, it's a story about these two women, and their lust, passion, and uniquely, their love.

Your writing is amazing, and the descriptions translate perfectly into pictures in ones mind.

The story of this couple should be a movie.

Can we hear.. screenplay?

Amazing story. Very well written.

An absolute pleasure to read, as usual. Thank you! ~ L

Fantastic story of the life. Obviously, you know what you're talking ... um, writing about! Thanks for bringing back some wonderful memories of my own.

This story brought a smile to my face the entire time I was reading it. Not just extremely sexy, which it was, this story is a little snapshot of two people still ridiculously in love. Most erotic stories are about new love or lust, this was a nice change of pace. Loved it, gave me the warm fuzzies lol.

Couldn't agree more with StoneBasher!

I didn't read a story here. It was a hot vignette. A good one.

But not a story.

It's a nice change from all of the drama starting off with total commitment to each other. Just 2 people that are obviously totally in love with each other and are comfortable showing it. I'm jealous.