Take your time with the details. And explain thoroughly
What each is thinking/feeling!
by
Anonymous01/31/04
Very Nice
I just love stories like this. Make sure you always use the same "voice", as in don't switch between I and she so much. It's distracting to the reader, and this was one plot that I did not want to be distracted from! Nicely done.
by
Anonymous11/08/08
oh yeah....
omg......this was soooooo hot......i loved it......this can really happen....i know.....my brother had to force me the first few times, but then i really started enjoying it & i still enjoy it.....he still makes me call him daddy when we fuck.....dadeesgrl2000 at yahoo
by
Anonymous02/05/10
Amazingly hot!
Why don't you write anymore? The two stories you've submitted are so unapologetically sexy it would be great if you wrote another.
this is so hott. Ive never fantasized about my father but the idea of incest gets me so wet.
by
Anonymous10/01/12
Does anybody else wonder
If you were a daddy and got your daughter pregnant and she had a girl, would they be sexually attracted to it to?
by
Anonymous05/02/13
Daddies are the best teachers for their daughters
Why because they know what buttons to press and how to gently get between their legs and load them up with active sperm . their should be much more activity between dads and daughters and of course mums and sons too
by
Anonymous12/31/13
not quite sure what to think
On the one hand; the sex itself is pretty damn hot
BUT
He's a loser - think about it. He's supposed to be a HUNK; big, strong, great looking. She admitted that she thinks he's hot; then instead of "manning up" and seducing her by honest means "romance her with dinner, music, dancing & a G-o-o-d movie" -- he has to wimp-out, get her drunk, introduce her to porn, and tie her down. Does he have a spine?
Honestly; he really isn't worth the dirt on the bottom of her shoes!
DKP
Too bad you stopped writing cause I'd like to see more from you.
Don't forget this is all fantasy.... All it's supposed to do is entertain you... It's not real and almost certainly would never happen like this....... (well, maybe in a few places it would for real).... but here it's happening only in our minds... and I'd admit that I've had fantasies similar to this though since I never had a daughter, they were JUST fantasies...
It would be fun to reenact them as if they were real.....
by
Anonymous02/10/14
Sex or Rape???
How could a daughter still love her father after he basically raped her??? Maybe it's someone's cup of tea, but certinally not mine...
by
Anonymous05/14/14
Hot for your daddy
Very similar circumstances happened to my dad and me. Dad divorced mom after he found pictures of her sucking a guys cock and he got custody of me. I always wore just T-shirt (no bra, although I was 34B) and panties in the house. One time I wore a thong and cropped shirt just to see what he'd say...not really intending to have sex. He really liked it and said I didn't have to change panties if that's what I wore that day. One night I had on a very skimpy Victoria's Secret lace thong that when I lied down on the sofa revealed my hairless pussy. The rest you can imagine!
He ruined her favourite nightie! I feel a shopping trip coming on lol.
Loved the theme but I have to echo what others of said about using either first or second person to write, don't keep swapping, its confusing.
English
Good Job!
Take your time with the details. And explain thoroughly
What each is thinking/feeling!
Very Nice
I just love stories like this. Make sure you always use the same "voice", as in don't switch between I and she so much. It's distracting to the reader, and this was one plot that I did not want to be distracted from! Nicely done.
oh yeah....
omg......this was soooooo hot......i loved it......this can really happen....i know.....my brother had to force me the first few times, but then i really started enjoying it & i still enjoy it.....he still makes me call him daddy when we fuck.....dadeesgrl2000 at yahoo
Amazingly hot!
Why don't you write anymore? The two stories you've submitted are so unapologetically sexy it would be great if you wrote another.
Riveting!!
Therefore putting an end to my little dry spell. Hot!
one of the best
one of the best stories i have read in a long time, look forward to more, very hot
very good story
very good story would love to read a ch. 2 to this
flip-flop naming conventions
Me, Her, I, all self-described the daughter.
Stick with first person or 2nd person, don't flip-flop back and forth, distracts from the story.
nice
continue the story
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hott
this is so hott. Ive never fantasized about my father but the idea of incest gets me so wet.
Does anybody else wonder
If you were a daddy and got your daughter pregnant and she had a girl, would they be sexually attracted to it to?
Daddies are the best teachers for their daughters
Why because they know what buttons to press and how to gently get between their legs and load them up with active sperm . their should be much more activity between dads and daughters and of course mums and sons too
not quite sure what to think
On the one hand; the sex itself is pretty damn hot
BUT
He's a loser - think about it. He's supposed to be a HUNK; big, strong, great looking. She admitted that she thinks he's hot; then instead of "manning up" and seducing her by honest means "romance her with dinner, music, dancing & a G-o-o-d movie" -- he has to wimp-out, get her drunk, introduce her to porn, and tie her down. Does he have a spine?
Honestly; he really isn't worth the dirt on the bottom of her shoes!
DKP
Too bad you stopped writing cause I'd like to see more from you.
Don't forget this is all fantasy.... All it's supposed to do is entertain you... It's not real and almost certainly would never happen like this....... (well, maybe in a few places it would for real).... but here it's happening only in our minds... and I'd admit that I've had fantasies similar to this though since I never had a daughter, they were JUST fantasies...
It would be fun to reenact them as if they were real.....
Sex or Rape???
How could a daughter still love her father after he basically raped her??? Maybe it's someone's cup of tea, but certinally not mine...
Hot for your daddy
Very similar circumstances happened to my dad and me. Dad divorced mom after he found pictures of her sucking a guys cock and he got custody of me. I always wore just T-shirt (no bra, although I was 34B) and panties in the house. One time I wore a thong and cropped shirt just to see what he'd say...not really intending to have sex. He really liked it and said I didn't have to change panties if that's what I wore that day. One night I had on a very skimpy Victoria's Secret lace thong that when I lied down on the sofa revealed my hairless pussy. The rest you can imagine!
RE: HOT FOR YOUR DADDY
PM me. I want to hear more about you and your daddy!
Naughty Daddy!
He ruined her favourite nightie! I feel a shopping trip coming on lol.
Loved the theme but I have to echo what others of said about using either first or second person to write, don't keep swapping, its confusing.
Daddy apparently doesn't know where the hymen is and should learn before telling more stories!
Good story
I've read both of your stories and liked them very much. Do you plan to write more? How about a part 2 to each of them?
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