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wow
wowowoowow! my tongue is all slippery with this one, and it feels delicious. I love reading your voice.
Amazing!
I absolutely adore this poem. *highlight and save* Keep on! Just a question...should the were be was?
I wish we'd see you more often. :)
Lover, Liver... with onions?
I'm sorry. I had to get that out of my system. lol
Really Good poem, fast paced, worth more than one read.
A spinning,
twirling word dance... very nice.
jim :)
A celebration
of life. The contrast between a stale lit-de-parade and a life that was lived to the fullest is a splendid observation.
didn't
do it for me. After the first stanza, it went straight downhill. The listing seemed so bland, unenthusiastic and rather strained by the end of the poem.
This one stayed with me
long after I was done reading. I just had to come back and let you know.
- Mindy
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