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amazing
awesome
a must read
Deliciously-devious Hot Couples
This story has a suspenseful plot with a little deviousness, intrigue, and delicious revenge. The motivational psychology of the characters is fascinating.
The sex is hot.
Great Story!
Very creative and very well written. I just love the hypnosis idea!
Absolutely G R E A T
All around great! Do more, and tell everyone about the other times the girls pretended.
love your idea!
Great concept,especially with a wife that goes along with the idea. Let's have more!
greaT
I loved it but where is the other story???? You need to get going and start writing it.
A great read
This is probably my favorite story on here. Great job with the whole story, can't wait to read more!
What Tangled Web's We Weave
You told a naughty twisted tale and it was a good one.
You have a totally hot, twisted mind!
I read your other story 1st, which led me to this one... This story shows your true talent! I hope you will write more soon and (please, don't be offended),possibly consider rewriting the end of the other one, tie up those loose ends & those little details that don't make sense and ruin what could of been an excellant story...and make it longer, please!.
Thoughroughly Enjoyable
Very Good. The sex was interspersed with just enough plot to keep it interesting.
Extremely well-written too.
Bring on Chapter 2!!!
Very good
Very good. This was a hell of a good story. It gave my wife and I many ideas. Thanks.
fuck-friendly
loved it, frickin great man! (or woman)
Great story Thanks
In my opinion you should write more ;)
Loved this one, even if the initial plot looked overknown, great retribution ;))
Fantastic Story!
Shawna's Dare is a great story... good characters, a delicious plot, and hot sex.
Great Start
I loved the beginning and the various twists, though the 'fuck feast' at the end was rather inevitable..
But Thank you for an entertaining story
Miranda
Best story I have ever read on here
More similar stories would be appreciated
Polaroids.... lol
Ah, the good old days before digital cams and internet. Great story. Show me a guy who wouldn't have done what Mark did and I will show you a guy who is not interested in women. I was worried he would not resolve the problem of Mark knowing the password or of Shawna wanting to try the lesbian experience. Glad those both got handled. Loved the story. Did not see the rope thing coming. Great twist.
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