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The Circle Ch. 26

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by Anonymous12/28/15

I liked this

This story reminds me of similar series of story written by someone named Rimantic1 in this site. I loved his work and I can see I'll like this!

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by Anonymous12/28/15

Romantic1

not Rimantic1.

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by Anonymous12/29/15

I like this story.

But the lead character in Fifty Shades of Grey is named Christian Grey, not Jonathan Grey.

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by Anonymous12/29/15

Expounded

"Bob expounded" should be the title of this. Conveying ideas work best when shown and gently explored, not just presented as exposition. Dull dull dull.

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