All Comments on 'Captivated Ch. 07'

Thanks again Catharinas for another fantastic and fascinating chapter. Poor Charly struggles between two worlds and feeling uncomfortable in either. We cant wait to read how she is helped.

Very emotional and touching story. Please shre moree. Thanks

Your story is really fascinating. Thanks. Dankie

This is such a clever story and I'm worried about Charly and her children...and Royce.

I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter to see what happens to Charly

What happens next?

Another abandoned story so typical of this site. Too bad, too, it's a good story...oh, well...

Hi. See you still around. How about a next chapter for Charly. PLEASE.

I truly hope you'll find the interest or inspiration you need to continue your Captivated

stories.

But I guess in Mermaid time that's a blink of an eye. But Royce doesn't want to wait and I suspect the Merman Prince gave her a gift she didn't realize she received sperm do swim in the ocean; penetration not always necessary; and he left called by his instincts to his other females, as she Charly was no longer in heat .

Please continue with this story. It's too good to remain unfinished.

Please,please continue. Love this story

Why start a series like this if you leave the reader at the most important time. I’m striking you from my favourites never to return. It’s infuriating.

I’m curious as to what happens next (especially as the story is filed under Romance).

For Readers of Belle of Bellville, I am editing chapters 13 & 14. There will be an Epilogue, as well. Please don't get impatient. I want to do the story right. Thank you to all my faithful readers!