by philadelphus
What happened to the mother? More sexual details. More lead up.
I liked it because it's not only erotic but humorous (no offense if you weren't trying to be humorous!). Your descriptive writing is terrific. I'll read more of your stuff!
"""Uuurrrrrgghhhh, ourrrrrrgghhhhh, aarrhhrrrrrrr, yaaaarrghhhhhh!"""
Rofl, that was horrible!! Lol! Sounds like a monster rising from the grave, hehe!
Two daughters and that’s the whole story? So many opportunities so little written.