Astrid: A Viking Story Ch. 02

Short and sweet

Keep it up!

2*s

Not a stand alone chapter.
Wrong category. Should be fantasy, maybe even non-erotic. I found it so, lol.Let you have 2*s.


AMerryman

Let's see where this goes...

Let's see where this goes...It's still in the beginning...And still not a LW story...I'll comment and rate it in the end...

Everything has to start somewhere. Can't imagine where this is going.

Just remember, obscurity does not equal drama. Vagueness does not equal suspense. So far the story is mostly vague, and obscure. I will wait to the end to rate the chapters, or at least until reading them becomes too tedious or boring.

smacks of more

Oops. Leif is going to come face to face with his niece who has gone ga-ga and will most probably try and kill him if he attacks Gunner. Leif has a brother - Nel - and a 'brother' - Gudrun - to revenge. If he finds out that his brother's daughter is not only protecting his brother's murderer, but has also knived his 'brother' to death, he'll be in for a bit of a predicament. This is starting to look pretty intriguing indeed!

And I know you're a bloodthirsty bastard, but pls try to not get Astrid or Leaf killed. It's completely sacrilegious to off anything with a cock thicker than a blacksmith's hammer (are we talking head or handle?) and I'm fond of crazy bitches. Shot for marvelous story!
Evebroughtanaxthistime
Ps chapter 3, chapter 3!
Chapter3! Chapter 3!

Oh please follow up on this story. It would be such a pity if you left it here! There's something about it that creates a category of its own. Intelligent Viking Pornography Smut? Oh well, I tried. Hope you come back...