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Impressive
Great characters! More, please. Mandy needs a strong hand. How will Jon react?
i would be pissed.does mandy like him for him or because she was told to?why would his friend put him in this set-up without his say so?
Lol
"Hey Mandy!"
"Hi Jon!"
"So how are--"
"Sorry to interrupt, but just to let you know up front I don't want to have sex with you or kiss you."
"...Nice to meet you, Mandy. Have a nice day."
Great story!
Very original, well done!
interesting plot idea
well written ..
sadly we only get a tiny look at this most complex relationship
and the story ends almost before it starts
for that reason i can understand why it has not scored / rated higher .
voted 4 stars .. but this could have so easily been developed into a four or five page favorite & literotica classic
Ditto.
A very good introduction of the characters, but if it is intended as a stand alone story there are too many plot and character threads left unresolved to be satisfying. I hope to see the next (few) chapters soon.
Have to agree with redlion
If someone is dating you, but isn't in control of themselves, then it's no different from being pimped out to you. I would hand her the key and tell her to call me when she is in control of her life.
Loved it but sad
I had a lot of fun reading and getting to know the characters but I was sad that their was no sex! At the end, I also can see this story getting more reads and higher rates if you continue this into a series. So will their be a continuation? If so then I will be very excited and can't wait.
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