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Adventures in Amsterdam

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by Anonymous02/01/04

Nice Idea

I enjoyed your story. It was an imaginative idea, and well writen.
Congratulations.

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by Anonymous02/03/04

A dirty mind is a joy forever.

Original, sparkling, eloquent, enticing, a serenade to the the (naughty) mind.

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by Anonymous10/18/05

The New Ulysses

Wow! Sheer genius. I thought that nobody would ever be able to write with such raw honesty about the experience of having an electrical chip in their panties. I salute you.

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