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by Anonymous

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by mountaincat412/29/15

More like a C minus OK

Like the dinner at the diner this story was mediocre at best and far from tasty. The sex lacked warmth or feeling even though that's what you should expect from sex with an aging whore. Everybody in the story seemed to just be trudging through their lives taking care of their biological needs without the slightest hint of enjoying anything. The spelling and grammar need work but the errors seemed to be in keeping with the overall tone of the story: Who really gives a shit?

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by FEELINGLUCKYPUNK12/29/15

Mountaincat

Thanks for the comment.

What you dislike was my target! I got the results I wanted. Your comment confirms it.

If readers want happy ever after Camelot romance I'm not the best place to get it. I do what I do best...depressing crap.

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by Sapper25702/01/16

Oh no

Loved the twist. Keep writing.

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