All Comments on '01 The Welcome Home'

I like your choice of wording. The main character comes across as a benevolent Dom...rather than a harsh one. Always preferred those type myself. Hard to have a conversation with someone who has all the societal graces of a drill instructor. (Joking)

Anyway, I like where this was going, don't know if you intend to finish it or not, or what the plot will be. Or if this is just a quick flash story?

Sincerely,

Payenbrant