Three Square Meals Ch. 04

hmmmm

Something is not as it seems. Very interesting story keep it up.

we all know malnutrition causes growth to be slowed so she got fed good and grew.keep waiting for them to actually fuck and her get knocked up with quads(hehe).

Hot spit the action heats up.

Glad to see things heating up it was getting somewhat stale there but now that the act is hitting new ground on several fronts yipee. I hope that the next chapter comes quickly as I am waiting for the bad guys to make thier play, I just hope Alysa isn't one of them she's just to persious to be a baddie.

Like how the story is progressing

At first I felt it was a little monotonous in someway, but the characters and their dynamics kept me reading on. I like how it's progressing. I'm interested in where things are going.

Nope

This story really screams like a relationship between a senior citizen and an underage girl, belay the fact that in the first chapter the girl said she was 18 and int the third implied that he was in his 60's. I came this far because I thought there will be more aside from the sex, in terms of sci-fi tones or space opera elements. But no, it's full of sex that goes: sex with a girl, almost a pre-pubescent one, and then fill up her belly with cum until she's engorged.

In response to anon

It's from Chapter 05 that the story really starts to pick up, but if you don't like cum inflation, then the story really isn't for you. :-)

If I was rewriting this all again from the beginning, I'd thicken up the plot a lot more from chapter 2 to 4. However, I didn't enjoy trying to backfill story when I did an edited chapter 3, as it was too tricky to add new info without damaging future reveals, so I'll just leave it as it is.

This story was my first attempt at writing, so I won't tamper with it too much, as I find it interesting to go back and see how I've developed over the months.

To Those Reading

This story grows drastically in the coming chapters, up until now it was developing the authors writing skill and abilities, from here its only upwards.
JC

Keep Reading; Amazing Where is Goes.

"Yes" to the previous JC comment in spades. Coming back from over 60 future chapters to reread the simple beginning of this epic is somewhat unreal. Reader, this one is well worth the time.