His Female Client is Really a Man

Not a man

A transwoman is NOT a man. That's why so many straight guys are attracted to them. Gay guys have ZERO interest in transwomen because they are into MEN.

It was just weird and gay how you kept referring to Michelle as "he".

i agree with JessicaAlexander
"It was just weird and gay how you kept referring to Michelle as "he". "


it made me stop reading this story

Transexuals are Women

Actually fairly well written. It was disturbing though just like other readers mentioned a pretty shemale is not a man. Emotionally they are a woman. I am an author as well. I have a transexual friend "Francine" that has given me several of her encounters. She also told me how transgenders are not he's or Trannys. She considers her self a woman in spite of having a nine inch penis. She reviewed a couple of my T-girl stories and informed me what was wrong with them. Franny is a top which is not the norm. Most transexuals are bottoms like your "ladyboy".

Work on it.

My view points on your pronoun choice involving Michelle has already been made.
Dialog feels a little cold and not much to it. Everything else involving grammer seems to be where you want it.
The noun issue killed me.

2/5

Sorry, More of the Same

Had to stop reading as well... "He" just leaves me... well, unsatisfied

Franny the Tranny" your 'aving a laugh, made up name or wot!!
Good story but, they are right about Michelle being called a he.

Loud and Clear

Thank you all for your constructive comments. I have heard you loud and clear and I will not make this mistake again.

nicd story.. but gender issues

Nicely written but to everyone: always refer to people in the gender they present themselves as... she or he ... her or him .. please do write more

Slight Offensive

As a transgender woman I find the fact that the writer decides to change pronouns once the discovery is made about Michelle to be very offensive, just because a girl has a dick does not make her the opposite gender, it's always about identity; this applies to the title too.

I liked the story!

Enjoyed the good descriptive sex...good yarn!

His Female Client has no intention of being a Man

This story would be much easier to read if you were to stick to addressing Tim as "he"/"him" and Michelle as "she"/"her". She doesn't want to be a man... respect that.

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That way, if the reader sees "him" it's clear that refers to Tim, as Michelle is "she".