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An Anonymous Relationship Pt. 04

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by Trmptman12/30/15

Great series

I've really enjoyed your series. Hoping the 3 of them get together in person. Or Dad brings a friend to fuck his daughter at the glory hole. Lots of ways this could go. Keep it going.

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by Anonymous12/30/15

Great series of stories, anxiously awaiting the next instalments

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by Anonymous12/31/15

Daddy, Daughter and best friend. What a threesome, now daughter needs to stop bidding behind her computer screen and admit she's her daddies lover as its only right because the best friend would likely move in on a hot dad

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by Anonymous12/31/15

Great story

Great story...Keep up the good work.. :) Can't wait to read more..

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by Anonymous12/31/15

Meh

Not a fan now that the friend joined. Don't think I will be reading the rest. Well written, though.

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by Wtiteone6912/31/15

Please Keep Reading

To all who have been reading. First Thank You for reading!

I know that some of you are disappointed that I have brought Stacy into the sexual relationship with Heather's Father. The story has a ways to go and like real life sometimes things get complicated. There are temptations, discoveries and passions from all sides. Also most things are not what they first seem to be.

Part 5 has been submitted and the plot will be moved forward but probably not as expected.

Again enjoy!

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by Anonymous01/01/16

Wow... How predictable. Embarrassingly predictable.

Bored and fed up with an overused, done to death, so called plot twist that is EVERYWHERE.

Your story is just one of the crowd. Congratulations for being nothing but another copy cat.

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didn't read entire story not yet:

i'll agree what other people saying - woulda still been phenomenal
not adding Stacy around literally fucking Heather's father especially everything
that you've been doing the franchise thus far howwwweverrrrrrrrrrrrrrr the way
Stacy fucked Heather's father exactly how Stacy fucked Heather's father
happened excellent happened awesome happened sensational ........ plot twist
- Stacy learns just how badly that Beverly,,Melanie been treating Heather
Stacy also learns more about just how badly they've treated
Heather's father Stacy now plots revenge the seductive camcording revenge
does Stacy keep everything completely under her control orrrrrrrrrrrrrr
does she quickly become exactly like Heather's mother utterly unable
resist Melanie ..... hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

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by QuickSilver041501/02/16

Adding Stacy

Is still a great idea I think. It shows how you're serious into making this a legitimate story with ups and downs and twists and emotions. I'm excited to see where you're taking this. I'm actually very excited! Keep up the great work!!!

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by Bambi_Doe01/02/16

Le sigh

You just had to go the predictable route. Adding Stacy in this chapter was lame. It may add something in the coming chapters but it wasn't even entertaining. While this is a well written story this is going in a direction like all the rest. Its your work so you don't need our permission to do what you want with it. This is just my opinion

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