by jason_dancer
Excellent. I like to see a story with build-up, but not one that gets TOO engrossed in every little detail. The real art to erotice is to leave enough room for the readers fantasy to come true, and the beginning to this story does just that. Keep up the good work!
Nice story, especially since it is a true one. Do continue and share what followed with our readers. (By the way, Italians are caucasians, too).
Racism really turns me off, so I stopped reading after the stupid comment about being half Caucasion and half Italian since one is a race and the other is a nationality which IS Caucasian. This guy needs to get a basic education.
This story was awesome, but it left me hanging. i want more. make part two! and post more stories!
I've lived it man. For two years, my cousin and I were together. Post more!!! I just might right my own story!!!
yikes. that was hot
I've got a crush on my 2nd cuz...I was thinking of her and me in that story...
PLEASE FINISH THE STORY! DON"T TORMENT US!!! :)
great job
The guy seemed gay almost fruity, the author doesnt even know his own heritage, and swears the story is real. I dont care if a story is made up or not but this one needs alot of work, get yourself an editor and let them make it believable
Too bad you weren't able to complete your story. some flaws, but showed a lot of promice.
You should read the positive comments and consider the "helpful" ones. Almost everyone gets some of the other kind also. Ignore them. No one, no story gets top comments from everyone.
I hope you take the time to complete the story you started, and to contribute other stories also.
JS/USA/TN
This is my first comment... i even signed up, just to comment on this story ! somthing similiar happened with my current gf, she told me what happened, i was so turned on by it, so i came to this page, found this story... and yeah i need more ! please let us know what happens next... cheers !
My cousin and I have had several lustful moments, before we finally gave into temptation. I plan on writing about these times soon. I would like to hear more of your experiences though, glad to know i'm not the only one with lusty thoughts and actions with a cousin.
So hot! Your cousin sounds gorgeous please post more stories! Pictures would be hot of her too!!
Same thing happened to me... we dont live together just made out and stuff... were gonna have sex soon lol haha im just making him suffer...
I want to read more and is it possible to see some pictures of your cousin bc while I was reading this I was getting a hard on.
I've been in a similar situation and that intense moment before your lips hit is amazing!
dying to hear the rest! ;)