All Comments on 'The Game'

by Psishadow

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Gnrlsuper100Gnrlsuper100over 8 years ago
Go on please...

You have it building nicely. Please continue, and soon!

harley233harley233over 8 years ago
I'll reserve voting pending more chapters.

More chapters = *****. No more chapters = * for an incomplete story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The whole 'slave' thing came out of nowhere and felt out of place.

There was no setup to explain it, is this a normal occurrence for this group? Are they all fuck buddies? Are any in committed relationships? These details are important in my opinion because they add context that pulls you deeper into the characters lives. If not that is something that really should have been explained to the players along with all the other rules of the game. Michelle even says to remember the slave rule when it was never stated before. Maybe I'm just being thick but thats my thoughts on it.

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