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Cliff Hanger or End?
I will withhold judgement. If you stop here it is I hate.
Dont leave us here
Come on man. You cant just leave us here. What happens next? How does their relationship progress. What happens with Calara?
In the words of Seth Gecko: "I might be a bastard, but I'm not a fucking bastard!"
Not big fans of cliffhangers then? :)
Don't worry, Chapter 6 is ready for submission, Chapter 8 is partly written too.
Nice story
The age gap means nothing to two people who genuinely live each other. I have several friends that have large age gaps between them and their spouses. If it is meant to be, then it will work out.
What, no investigation?
The Federation lost a corvette and 14 members of its crew and no one wanted to take their statements before they left?
Nice catch
I had imagined that John filled in the medical team when they came to collect Calara, so I didn't bother to go into detail. Your feedback inspired me for Chapter 08 though, so thanks!
Something I noticed.
That's a lot of wasted space, good rescue I could use more of the action.
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