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In Places on the Run Ch. 04

byAdrian Leverkuhn©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/02/16

Wow

Wasn't expecting that. Many thanks

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by Anonymous01/02/16

What a jerk

I hope there turns out to be something redeemable about these guys in the end cause I don't see anything right now.

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by rightbank01/02/16

surprise

and another character is added to the cast.

He is right, he is playing a peripheral role, while others are writing the script.

next?

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by rightbank01/02/16

I had to go back and read the sequence when Rhea told about her early life

the carefully worded language has a different meaning now that we know their history (one night) and about Lucy. Well done AL, well done.

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by Anonymous01/02/16

I can't get over this

Wierd is the word isn't it.
I wonder where and how the Aufloesung in this polyphony.
D.S.

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by Anonymous01/02/16

zero chance

rhea and john 30 yr age diff. now a baby on the way, college, med school she will have NO time for him @ all and Deborah yikes all these years never a peep about lucy john get on your motorcycle an ride away from this nut house get Lucy's # to keep in touch Leverkuhn your are one of the best!! stlcris

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by bruce2201/03/16

Excellent Story

Lots happening. And some quick dance steps. I not that in the commentaries no one was thinking about the bun in the oven. Personally I would abort the motorcycle ride at that moment and settle in Cambridge for three months.

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by Bd455401/06/16

Great story so far

I've been trying hard to like Anders from the beginning, but something was holding me back. He's a well-constructed, complex character in a great story, but I fear that in the end I will hate his guts as he deserts everyone important in his life except for Sam. I hope I'm wrong. In any case, this is another wonderful contribution from one of the very finest authors on the site.

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