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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/29/04

nice

very descriptive, enjoyable poem :)

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by WickedEve01/29/04

I like this

Good job on the poem but when I go to the beach this summer I'll be on the look out for you. lol

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by 01/30/04

Tank tops bending over for bread.....

sand in the sammiches......I smell the suntan cream. Lovely little poem

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by Lalenya Love03/01/04

Evocative

This poem recreates not only a visual image but the emotions felt by the viewer as well.

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