Good Girl Ch. 01

Awesome

HOT...HOT...HOT...SOOOOOOOOO SUBLIMELY HOT!!!!!!!!!!!

Gawd that is one of the Hottest things I have ever read! The descriptive passion was intoxicating!!!!!

WOW - so HOT and erotic ....... glad they got there and mutually enjoyed it ...... now maybe his sister will want him to screw her slow and long ....... to savor their mutual cumming. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you.

good

but Really You've been masturbating in front of each other for years and this is 1st time they've done anything to each other & it's her taking his 8" cock up her arse #Really
Oh & now i think about it
(So Tom and I planned that tonight would be the night. We were going to have sex for the first time)
Later you say (Its not like I am a virgin) so what/why where Tom & you waiting for ?

mistakes

Good grief. Missing or incorrect words....wtf? Get a proofreader.

Good

This is a good, fast paced story. It could have been even better had you not left words out or used a dictionary, not spellcheck.

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

oh my god.. that was amazing! i loved the relationship between the two. i have the same exact kind of masterbating/dick out type relationship with my cousin and i totally related to this! i fuckin loved it. more please!!

okay, I guess

But when it comes to doing the deed, why do Peter and Andrea want him to do it up her asshole? When a normal brother fucks his own sister--like lots of them would love to--he's going to fuck her up that cute little coochie she's got between her thighs. And that's what any normal sister would want, too. Face it, a cock up her backdoor is a real pain in the ass.

anonymous

chapters chapters, chapters, do I get tired of all these chapters